Sentence 1: original the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable corrected The Titanic, once believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
Sentence 2: original the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land corrected Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary to finish reading Eliot's long poem, The Waste Land.
DOL 26
Sentence 1: original a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly corrected Many well known writers submit articles and stories to The Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2: original i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library corrected "I am very eager to read the French novel The Plague," Carmen said, "But it is not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1: original everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations corrected Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2: original having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner corrected Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1: original i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet corrected I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest I had ever seen, to observe Halley's Comet.
Sentence 2: original ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing corrected Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel all right now, Walter, or do you want to go skiing?"
DOL 29-32 SKIP
DOL 33
Sentence 1: original when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library corrected "When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?"
Sentence 2: original after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified corrected After The Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
DOL 34
Sentence 1: original much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain corrected Much depends on whether you are affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
Sentence 2: original while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier corrected While half the class use the internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazine that is different from the ones we used earlier.
DOL 35
Sentence 1: original oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft corrected Oh, we haven't finished our group book report, because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft.
Sentence 2: original since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming corrected My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, liking in Montana, and Caping in Wyoming.
DOL 36
Sentence 1: original there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated corrected "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal stated.
Sentence 2: original the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think corrected The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.
DOL 37
Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain) original
ms paula jeffers
campton paper company
18376 river drive
minneaplois mn
dear ms jeffers corrected
Ms. Paula Jeffers
Campton Paper Company
18376 River Drive
Minneaplois, Mn.
Dear Ms. Jeffers,
DOL 38
Sentence 1: original because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy corrected The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights we are all privileged to enjoy.
Sentence 2: original we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew corrected We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flu.
DOL 39
Sentence 1: original to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner corrected To be allowed to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help mom fix dinner.
Sentence 2: original mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29 corrected Mr. Corazzini who can never start his car took the bus to Dulles airport on Tuesday, October 29.
DOL 40
Sentence 1: original luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico corrected Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin who is in Atlanta.
Sentence 2: original oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry corrected Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you do not have a lot of things to carry.
DOL 41
Sentence 1: original park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to mark leads to encourage new growth corrected Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked leads to encourage new growth.
Sentence 2: original after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs corrected After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; though, ironically, forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.
DOL 42
Sentence 1: original because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination corrected Differences between the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination.
Sentence 2: original first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests corrected First, Felicia planned the party; second, she decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.
DOL 43
Sentence 1: original do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club corrected Does Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?
Sentence 2: original the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found corrected The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book Shipwrecks was written by Kiber and Rotondi, who believe the gallleons will be found.
DOL 44
Sentence 1: original neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good corrected Neither Rasheed nor Larry doesn't want his team loss to suggest that team member didn't play well.
Sentence 2: original mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked corrected Mr. Kato explained that the rule dos not affect the entire school,only individual students according to the handbook rule.
Sentence 1:
original the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
corrected The Titanic, once believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
Sentence 2:
original the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
corrected Because the student teacher arrives next week, it is necessary to finish reading Eliot's long poem, The Waste Land.
DOL 26
Sentence 1:
original a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
corrected Many well known writers submit articles and stories to The Atlantic Monthly, a renowned magazine.
Sentence 2:
original i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
corrected "I am very eager to read the French novel The Plague," Carmen said, "But it is not in our library."
DOL 27
Sentence 1:
original everyone in this grade are responsible for this years dance therefore we all must raise funds for the decorations
corrected Everyone in this grade is responsible for this year's dance; therefore, we all must raise funds for the decorations.
Sentence 2:
original having worked for 8 hours i need to set down listen to music and the enjoyment of a good dinner
corrected Having worked for eight hours, I need to sit down, listen to music, and enjoy a good dinner.
DOL 28
Sentence 1:
original i remember when my neighbor he set up a huge telescope the larger i had ever seen to observe halleys comet
corrected I remember when my neighbor set up a huge telescope, the largest I had ever seen, to observe Halley's Comet.
Sentence 2:
original ms masayo asked do you feel alright now walter or dont you want to go skiing
corrected Ms. Masayo asked, "Do you feel all right now, Walter, or do you want to go skiing?"
DOL 29-32 SKIP
DOL 33
Sentence 1:
original when are these books due hans should i bringn them to the library
corrected "When are these books due? Hans, should I bring them to the library?"
Sentence 2:
original after the constitutional convention of 1787 drafted the constitution of the united states almost 3 years passed before it was ratified
corrected After The Constitutional Convention of 1787 drafted the Constitution of the United States, almost three years passed before it was ratified.
DOL 34
Sentence 1:
original much depends on weather your effected by the high altitude when you climbed the mountain
corrected Much depends on whether you are affected by the high altitude when you climb the mountain.
Sentence 2:
original while half the class uses the Internet the rest will study the smithsonian magazines that re different than the ones we used earlier
corrected While half the class use the internet, the rest will study the Smithsonian magazine that is different from the ones we used earlier.
DOL 35
Sentence 1:
original oh we havent got finished with our group book report the reason is because everyone dont have a copy of marie's draft
corrected Oh, we haven't finished our group book report, because everyone doesn't have a copy of Marie's draft.
Sentence 2:
original since my Mom likes canoeing on the yellowstone river hikes in montana and camps in wyoming
corrected My mom likes canoeing on the Yellowstone River, liking in Montana, and Caping in Wyoming.
DOL 36
Sentence 1:
original there are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice mrs ahmed the new principal stated
corrected "There are some athletes who rarely play but continue to practice," Mrs. Ahmed, the new principal stated.
Sentence 2:
original the world series although often exciting sometimes is to slow paced for me and my mom we think
corrected The World Series, although often exciting, sometimes is too slow paced for me and my mom.
DOL 37
Sentence 1: (this is the heading to a letter - I will explain)
original
ms paula jeffers
campton paper company
18376 river drive
minneaplois mn
dear ms jeffers
corrected
Ms. Paula Jeffers
Campton Paper Company
18376 River Drive
Minneaplois, Mn.
Dear Ms. Jeffers,
DOL 38
Sentence 1:
original because the united states constitution sits out certain individual writes that we is all privileged to enjoy
corrected The United States Constitution sets out certain individual rights we are all privileged to enjoy.
Sentence 2:
original we havent neither the time or the ability to practice the play the reason being we lost so many actors to the flew
corrected We have neither the time nor the ability to practice the play because we lost so many actors to the flu.
DOL 39
Sentence 1:
original to be allowed to to to the party i had to finish my science project cleaning my room and helping my Mom fix dinner
corrected To be allowed to the party, I had to finish my science project, clean my room, and help mom fix dinner.
Sentence 2:
original mr corazzini who cant never start his car was taken by bus too dulles airport on tuesday october 29
corrected Mr. Corazzini who can never start his car took the bus to Dulles airport on Tuesday, October 29.
DOL 40
Sentence 1:
original luisa bought a antique pitcher for her cousin who is in atlanta which had came from mexico
corrected Luisa bought an antique pitcher in Mexico for her cousin who is in Atlanta.
Sentence 2:
original oscar please sit these books on the library table if you dont have alot of things to carry
corrected Oscar, please set these books on the library table if you do not have a lot of things to carry.
DOL 41
Sentence 1:
original park rangers who works in large forests periodically set fire to mark leads to encourage new growth
corrected Park Rangers, who work in large forests, periodically set fire to marked leads to encourage new growth.
Sentence 2:
original after the discovery of penicillin very many miracle drugs appeared ironically though 40 years bacteria are becoming very much more resistant to drugs
corrected After the discovery of penicillin, many miracle drugs appeared; though, ironically, forty years later bacteria are becoming more resistant to drugs.
DOL 42
Sentence 1:
original because of differences between the 8 camp counselors causing a change in the field trips destination
corrected Differences between the eight camp counselors caused a change in the field trip's destination.
Sentence 2:
original first felicia planned the party secondly deciding on decorations theird she invited special guests
corrected First, Felicia planned the party; second, she decided on decorations; third, she invited special guests.
DOL 43
Sentence 1:
original do juan and davids ownership of this Sailboat entitle them two to membership in the winthrop beach yacht club
corrected Does Juan and David's ownership of this sailboat entitle them to membership in the Winthrop Beach Yacht Club?
Sentence 2:
original the article in search of spanish galleons in the book shipwrecks was writed by kiber and rotondi who believes it will be found
corrected The article "In Search of Spanish Galleons" in the book Shipwrecks was written by Kiber and Rotondi, who believe the gallleons will be found.
DOL 44
Sentence 1:
original neither rasheed or larry dont want their teams loss to suggest that team members didnt play good
corrected Neither Rasheed nor Larry doesn't want his team loss to suggest that team member didn't play well.
Sentence 2:
original mr. Kato explained that because the rule does not effect the entire school but only individual students as a result of that rule the student handbook was checked
corrected Mr. Kato explained that the rule dos not affect the entire school,only individual students according to the handbook rule.